Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In contemporary society, the importance of physical and mental health to be a sports winner has been a controversial issue in many parts of the world. It is argued that physical strength is the main element to be successful in the sports field. Nevertheless, I am inclined that this one should be combined with spiritual insurance which is indispensable in sports.
On the one hand, sports require contestants never giving up throughout their routes, which means that sporters have to live in a good health background. For example, to be allowed to enrol in sports competition, contestants have to ensure that they do not withstand health problems, such as cardiovascular or bone problems to avoid being injured and taking risks while playing. In addition, sports are related to cooperation ability and flexible body; therefore, players have to be under the harsh training of physical health to make sure that they can meet these basic needs to succeed. Indeed, people will stop continuing physical practice due to the limitation of health.
On the other hand, even when players are accomplished but they can not be a winner without support. Football supporters, for instance, can give players emotional support, so they are determined to win to make fans not be disappointed. Also, encouragement can help people to be more self-assured. When they are ready, they can take their chance; when they suffer from feelings of worrying, loneliness, and anxiety, they will miss these chance to win. For example, when a football player feels that he lags behind others in professional ability, his legs feel like jelly and have no power even to walk.
In conclusion, while physical strength makes perfect sense to help players become more flexible, cooperated, and persisted, I claim that mental health should not be ignored due to certain aforementioned reasons. I suggest that people should have a balance between the two.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...e of physical and mental health to be a sports winner has been a controversial issue i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14057507987 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87984037592 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581469648562 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5453040281 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.928571429 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167607405868 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672244618603 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500898980199 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112716713664 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379679389477 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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