Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that this is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting
Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answer.
Parents play a crucial role in a child’s development in his growing years. While some people believe that a mother’s role is vital in raising a child compared to that of a father’s, I am of a different opinion. According to my view, a man can also make as good parent as a woman. The following paragraphs will elaborate my view in detail.
It has been seen from many centuries that women tend to take the responsibility of the family by raising children, providing delicious meals and men support financially by working on a job or a business. This phenomenon has continued for so long that people have subconsciously accepted that no man can be as better a parent as a woman. According to a survey conducted by the government of India in 2013, 68% of the population of our country believes that a mother plays a more superior role in raising a child than a father.
On the other hand, societies are now going through a series of changes where the above belief of only men supporting economically is dropping rapidly. In order to survive and to enjoy a comfortable lifestyle, both men and women need to work on a job and hold responsibilities of raising children together. As a result, men have also developed the habits of getting more involved in their children’s upbringing. Furthermore, if we consider about feeding the family, men are also as good as women in the kitchen. As I have personally witnessed, my cousin usually takes care of his daughter fulfilling each and every requirement of the child while his wife supports financially. They are certainly living a joyful and wonderful life.
To conclude, with time and because of which a rapidly changing world has broken many beliefs of the past and this is one of them. A father is capable of parenting as good as a mother.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72698412698 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9368871484 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580952380952 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5891677684 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315669832252 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915667784629 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422205985969 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169806964798 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449236074803 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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