On a recent trip, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of the insurance company. in your letter
• describe the item you lost
• to explain how you lost it
• tell the insurance company
• what you want them to dO
HELLO SIR ,
I AM WRITING THIS LETTER TO INFORM YOU THAT I HAVE LOST MY VALUABLE ITEM ON MY RECENT TRIP BUT LUCKILY I HAVE TRAVEL INSURANCE FROM YOUR COMPANY.
THE ITEM THAT I HAVE LOST IS MY LENOVA LAPTOP HAVING CONFIRGATION OF 8 GB RAM , I7 PROCESSOR , 1TB HARD DISK.WHEN I WAS WAITING IN CHANDIGARH AIRPORT FOR MY FLIGHT. ALL MY LUGGAGES WERE BESIDE ME AND I WAS READING A MAGZINE BUT WHEN I LEFT FOR MY FLIGHT I REALIZED THAT MY LAPTOP BAG WAS NOT WITH ME. THEN I RUSHED HERE AND THERE FOR MY BAG BUT I DID NOT FOUND MY BAG.
AND IN YOUR INSURANCE POLICY IT IS MENTION THAT THE 80% VALUE OF LOSTED ITEM WILL BE PAID BY THE COMPANY. SO I HAVE A HUMBLE REQUEST FROM YOU TO PLEASE LET ME KNOW ALL THE FORMALITIES FROM MY SIDE SO THAT CAN BUY A NEW LAPTOP AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.
I WILL BE WAITING TO HEARING FROM YOU.
YOUR SINCERELY
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
HELLO SIR , I AM WRITING THIS LETTER TO INFORM YOU...
^^
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...A LAPTOP HAVING CONFIRGATION OF 8 GB RAM , I7 PROCESSOR , 1TB HARD DISK.WHEN I WAS...
^^
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... CONFIRGATION OF 8 GB RAM , I7 PROCESSOR , 1TB HARD DISK.WHEN I WAS WAITING IN CHA...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 671.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.0421686747 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28357907191 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602409638554 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1317642752 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8571428571 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243799025453 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12115354298 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129020896436 0.0603063233224 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197123746136 0.12726935374 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147503366927 0.0580467560999 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.45 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.