The maps below show the changes of the local museum from 1957 to 2007.

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The maps below show the changes of the local museum from 1957 to 2007.

The three maps show the modification made to the local museum and the changes of its surroundings from 1957 to 2007.

As we can see from the first map, in 1957, the local museum was divided into three parts, the hall, the public reading room and the kitcher. At this time, the door of the museum was opened to the west of the hall, just right off the Hartford Road. The local museum was surrounded by a garden which was almost three times larger than itself.

After 30 years in 1987, it can be seen from the second diagram that the general size remained compared to that in 1957. However, the kit...

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