Our current way of living the life will have impact on future generations. Agree of disagree?
Many people wonder if our current way of living the life will have impact on future generations. It is an irrefutable fact that the health of the Earth is deteriorating day by day by different human activities. Human activities will cause the problems like increase in pollution, decrease in natural resources and disruption of food chain. Thus, this activities will definitely harm on future generations.
First of all, most of the human activities cause pollution. We can take an example of building a house which bolsters on the claim that most human activities will cause pollution. When we want to build a house, we will be needing bricks and cement. Sand and other resources for bricks and cement is collected from the land. This will cause land pollution. Moreover, after collection of resources factories will produce bricks which will cause air pollution and may also cause water pollution if the factory is near the river or other water resources. From this example, we can know how many types of pollution is caused by human with just one activities. Consequently, after increase in pollution people will have to live difficult life in future.
Second, human activity will cause decrease in natural resources. All human activities require natural resources and in future due to decrease of natural resources our future generation will have scarcity of resources and will further effect on there daily lifestyle. For instance, after we excessively use gas for vehicle there will scarcity of this resource in future. This may result our future generation to buy gas for more price which will have negative impact on life of future generations.
Third, the way we live our life will soon cause biological problem. Biological problems like extinction of animals and development of a new disease could occur. When an animal becomes extinct it will harm on food chain. This harm not be reflected soon but in long term our future generation will have to face the consequences. Our activity can also develop new diseases. We can take example of the recent pandemic caused by covid-19. This has disrupted many of our life. Specifically, small children could have mental issues due to this pandemic which will have negative impact on future generations.
In sum, I believe that activities done by human will deteriorate the envionment and will further hamper the life of future generations. We can already see some of the impact, like depletion of ozone layer, caused by the activities of our past generation. So, it is certain that if we don't change our current way of life it will have negative impact on future generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'day by'.
Suggestion: day by
...he health of the Earth is deteriorating day by day by different human activities. Human activ...
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Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ces and disruption of food chain. Thus, this activities will definitely harm on futu...
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Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... When we want to build a house, we will be needing bricks and cement. Sand and other resou...
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Line 3, column 640, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one activity', 'an activity', or simply 'activities'?
Suggestion: one activity; an activity; activities
... pollution is caused by human with just one activities. Consequently, after increase in pollut...
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Line 3, column 738, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...people will have to live difficult life in future. Second, human activity will cause d...
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Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[7]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
... scarcity of resources and will further effect on there daily lifestyle. For instance,...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...velopment of a new disease could occur. When an animal becomes extinct it will harm ...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... future generations. We can already see some of the impact, like depletion of ozone layer, ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...eneration. So, it is certain that if we dont change our current way of life it will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, third, thus, as for, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 30.0 9.8082437276 306% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2204.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05504587156 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71415471281 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422018348624 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 713.7 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1762580253 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6296296296 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1481481481 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07407407407 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373337207976 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128090518625 0.076458572812 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14222438511 0.0737576698707 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270864893874 0.150856017488 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891219406556 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.