One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in a new business. Write a letter to reply to your friend’s business offer. In your letter
give your opinion of your friend’s business idea
tell him/her whether or not you have decided to accept the offer
and explain your reasons for this decision.
Dear Mary,
Hope you're doing great. How are the kids? I'm just writing to give my views on the business idea you shared with me last month.
I'm sorry it took me this long to reply, as I really wanted to do my research and get back to you with a detailed feedback. I'm so happy to see you so enthusiastic about this new venture! I truly believe that it's a great idea, which has high potential and the market for this is growing. Opening a travel agency which focuses on safety is the need of the hour.
As much as I love the concept and the idea of working with you, I unfortunately have to decline the partnership offer. I am not financially stable enough to invest in this right now.
The reason for this is that, I am, right now, in between jobs and am working as a freelancer. I do not have the appetite to invest in something new right now. I would love to work with you on a contract pro bono but I am afraid that's the best I can do right now to help you in this new phase of your journey.
I wish you all the best for the new business and I can't wait to hear about all your achievements.
Your Sincerely
Karry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mary, Hope youre doing great. How are the kids...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Mary, Hope youre doing great. How are the kids? Im just ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...pe youre doing great. How are the kids? Im just writing to give my views on the bu...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...idea you shared with me last month. Im sorry it took me this long to reply, as...
^^
Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t back to you with a detailed feedback. Im so happy to see you so enthusiastic abo...
^^
Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...t back to you with a detailed feedback. Im so happy to see you so enthusiastic abo...
^^
Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... this new venture! I truly believe that its a great idea, which has high potential ...
^^^
Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble enough to invest in this right now. The reason for this is that, I am, right...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 67, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...t, I am, right now, in between jobs and am working as a freelancer. I do not have ...
^^
Line 9, column 229, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... on a contract pro bono but I am afraid thats the best I can do right now to help you...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... in this new phase of your journey. I wish you all the best for the new busin...
^
Line 11, column 52, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...all the best for the new business and I cant wait to hear about all your achievement...
^^^^
Line 13, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll your achievements. Your Sincerely Karry
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, so, thus, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.14027149321 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29593313083 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561085972851 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9730891435 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3846153846 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21696414963 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825979765403 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755930844125 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130570982563 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681132351157 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.44 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.