Some people think its better to live with a roommate. Other people prefer to
live alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to
support your answer.
Most of us live in hostels where we can either share the room or live alone. In my opinion I think its
better to share the room with a roommate. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the
following essay.
Firstly, when we are away from our family, we are likely to fall homesick and if we share our rooms
with a roommate, we have a person to share our emotions and feelings. Also, roommates will be
able to guide us and help us through the college days. Living alone can often put us in depression
and thoughts of loneliness, whereas when you have the right roommate you will always have a
person to exchange your thoughts. For example, if your bad a particular subject and that being the
very same subject your roommate is good at, you can always learn together.
Secondly, the bond you will be sharing will be just beautiful. You will definitely get a best friend who
will look after you at all times. The memories made with a roommate will be really memorable and
looking back after years we wont regret it. They will take care of you when you fall sick. For example,
I was doing part-time job while I was studying and once, I fell ill and that’s when I realized how lucky
I was to have an amazing roommate who not only took notes for me in class but, also, she covered
my shift at work so that I will won’t have a loss of pay. I am still grateful to her for that kind act of
hers.
In conclusion, I would like to end by saying that its always better to live with a roommate rather
than living alone. This is because you will have a special bond and a person to support you at the
times of need which wouldn’t be possible if we live alone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 87, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...just beautiful. You will definitely get a best friend who will look after you at...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, while, as to, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29906542056 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21351347186 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535825545171 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6646182144 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 5.45110844103 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.53405017921 375% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189080303308 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762284832545 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608258237307 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718722790733 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502633444629 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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