Many old buildings protected by law are part of nation's history.Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by news ones .
How important is to maintain old buildings ? Should history stand in the way of progress ?
In this contemporary era every individual wants to get change in there city by razing down old structures to built new buildings. However,longstanding buildings have a little or nothing to tell us . I agree with this presentment and I would like to confabulate this in first and foremost paragraph.
To commence with there are umpteen points can be mentioned to state that old buildings should be reshuffle from town .Firstly , Ancient structures
are often hazardous for the folk and the surroundings owing to this administration has to look after their maintenance simultaneously earlier buildings occupy ample of space which is good for nothing . And it badly effect the budget of the government . In augmentation to it , if they are razed down , the area can be further developed according to new generation by using the advance technology . Further emphasizing my point of view , establishment of new structures makes the town more estatic and besides this, it provide employment to the job seekers , which straightly the economy to boost.
On the paradoxical side, some people came ahead and argue that old buildings represent our ancient culture by destroying them down will result in the end of historical knowledge, just because of it , at one time we lost our mythological culture. Last but not least , primitive culture like Taj Mahal , Hawamahal and so on these depict our gratefullness to the other countries along with it , it is also becomes a major source of income , as mammoth of people daily come from other nations to see the magnificance of these ancient bulidings .
To recapitulate my point of view , after confabulating both segments it is lucid that , no doubt earlier structures show our historical culture.However,I ruminate that old buildings should be destroyed and should make way for new construction with better infrastructure for the development of country.
- Many old buildings protected by law are part of nation s history Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by news ones How important is to maintain old buildings Should history stand in the way of progress 84
- Success is due only to hardwork Luck does not make a person successful or unsuccessful Do you agree or disagree Use specific examples and reasons to explain your answer 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, as to, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48344370861 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22738805344 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615894039735 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.295014831 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.6 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191631026767 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655322761481 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570840222643 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112232561425 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484859635259 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.