Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disgree?
Recently, the topic as to the tuition fees of higher education should whether be subsidized by the government or not has been gainning the public’s attention. Although this is not without benefits, I contend that, from my own perspective, the drawbacks would be far higher than ones that will be addressed below.
There are several compelling reasons why some subsribe to the idea of provision of free-of-charge education. First, due to the cost of entering university that is often prohibitively expensive, an enormous number of students who are the disadvantaged find it incredibly hard to pay, leading to the chance of attending higher education which is almost over. In addition, in order to contribute to the thriving economy in the foreseeable future, which means that countries need to has an inordinate amount of educated workforce to meet the need of companies or authorities if the government agree with abolishing the tuition fees of university education.
Despite the aforementioned advantages, I personally think that disadvantages would pale in comparision with previous ones. The first one we easily realize that this will takes a heavy toll on governments. The unevitable consequences, namely budget deficit ,tax hires even reduced welfare , will definetely things that need to take into account before thinking of making the tuition fees free for all individuals. Furthermore, a host of things that have to be tackled immediately today, like helping people who are financially disavantaged families or erecting contructions which are beneficial to the environment or the comperetive needs of people in their daily life, in light of their pivotal roles in modern society. Last but not least, this is because the job market has been fierce more than it did before, became the unemployment the pressing issue quickly if all individuals were bachelor's degree holders.
In conclusion, although it is undeniable that the benefits of the policy of free-of-charge of university education have important roles to some a certain in contributing to the development of nations, I would believe that the above drawbacks will do more harm than good.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, as to, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32551319648 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10100918959 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607038123167 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.6604898748 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.090909091 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167186138692 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531122210358 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451420899354 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969284576487 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413003729602 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.