The graph illustrates the quantity of chicken, beef, lamb, and fish consumed in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
The line graph illustrates the amount of fish and meat consumed by a country in Europe from 1979 to 2004, a period of 25 years. Overall, the consumption of beef and lamb declined over the period, whereas the amount of chicken consumed increased, and the consumption of fish remained constant.
In 1979, the most popular meat in this country was beef, being eaten about 200 grams per person per week, followed consecutively by lamb and chicken. The consumption of beef remained on the top until 1989, and then began to decline gradually and finish in 2004 at just 100 per grams per week. In sharp contrast, chicken consumption increased steadily, catched up the consumption of lamb and overtook the consumption of beef in the beginning of the nineties, and was continue rising until achieving the highest consumption over the period.
Interestingly, fish was the least popular food in this country. The consumption of fish started far beneath the meats, approximately 50 per grams per week. It fluctuated slightly and ended the period a little lower than where it began.
Sentence: In sharp contrast, chicken consumption increased steadily, catched up the consumption of lamb and overtook the consumption of beef in the beginning of the nineties, and was continue rising until achieving the highest consumption over the period.
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Sentence: In sharp contrast, chicken consumption increased steadily, catched up the consumption of lamb and overtook the consumption of beef in the beginning of the nineties, and was continue rising until achieving the highest consumption over the period.
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