In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
With the advent of technology and better quality of medicines, the average human’s life span has inceased. This can lead unique consequence for the humankind as a whole. In this essay, I will discuss two notable issues that will arise from the population living longer and share some possible solutions to curb the
The rise of aging population affects snot only the person in question but also the overall community as a whole. The predominant problem that, in developed countries all its inhabitants enjoy the services provided through the tax money, however, the older you get the lesser tax you have to pay. In canada, for instance, citizens over the age of 60 year, do not have to pay taxes. With the rise in the number of senior citizens, the number of tax payers will reduce causign economic problems foe the country. Another serious concern is regarding the healthcare costs that an older person will have to incur. As you grow older your body becomes weak and need medicines to sruvive. With higher life expentancy, the person will spend more on maintaing his health in the later years of his life.
On the other hand, nevertheless, there are some possibe solutions to dilute the impact of this situation. To start with, the government can increase the legal age for citizens to stop paying taxes. This will help increase the corpus that is avaible with the government to spend on developments and invest in healthcase advancement. Additionally, these countries can allow immigration of the younger individuals from around the world. This will, futhermore, increase the category of people who will are eligible to pay taxes.
In conclusion, there are many problems that are born out of areing population, but with some strategic moves people can look at it as a positve situation.
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also, but, however, if, look, nevertheless, regarding, so, for instance, in conclusion, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 937.175257732 160% => OK
No of words: 301.0 206.0 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98338870432 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62497578986 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 127.690721649 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 290.88556701 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 1.44329896907 624% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.6778069441 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260206276418 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784386079708 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385721183243 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14305935955 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631528792641 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 41.2886597938 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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