TPO 64- integrated
The article states that growing a new type of broccoli on the east coast has many benefits and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that this project will not be as successful or beneficial as claimed and casts doubts on the points mentioned by the author.
First of all, the reading claims that growing broccoli on the East Coast will result in lower prices of broccoli in stores.This point is challenged by the professor by mentioning that although the transportation costs will be reduced this way, it does not mean that people will buy broccoli at lower prices. She explains that since the new broccoli has lower yields, farmers have to sell them at higher prices. So, this cancels out the savings on transportation costs.
Secondly, the reading posits that the new type of broccoli is produced by traditional breeding techniques, so many consumers will buy it instead of some of other new crops. However, the professor opposes this idea by saying that people are still suspicious. Since the company that supports this project is the same company that have produced many genetically modified foods in the past, people are not likely to trust this new broccoli and will refuse to buy it.
Finally, the article states that eating broccoli that is locally grown is much more healthier, because fresh vegetables are full of vitamins.However, the professor explains that there are many other local vegetables, such as kale, in the East Coast that have the same nutritional value as broccoli. She mentions that instead of investing time and energy on producing the new broccoli, people can eat fresh vegetables that already grow there.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e mail they will produce better work for the project Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Providing Internet access is just as important as other services such as building roads so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost Use specific reasons and examples 68
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 88
- Are people today more willing to help strangers 83
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 10 12
No. of Words: 278 250
No. of Characters: 1358 1200
No. of Different Words: 137 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.083 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.885 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.447 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 97 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 74 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.526 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.41 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.648 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.116 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4