Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
some people believes to accept the bad situation and ready to live with the same while others argue that it's better to change and overcome such things. In my opinion, it always better to get rid of unsatisfactory situations which will help you to lead a better and healthy life.
On the one hand, it is not always easy for people to change the difficult situations in their life especially if it relates to job satisfaction and lack of money. people need a job for earning money and without money, they can't live in this world. people are forced to stick to their job for the sake of money even if they do not like the work which they are into. For those people who think money is important than job satisfaction may have lots of commitments in their life. Once you are ready to accept such things in your life you will not be ready to change and you will end up with losing your health and life also with it.
On the flip side of the coin, some people are ready to take a risk and improve the unhealthy situations in their life and move forward with a positive attitude. We can earn money from a job which you love to do. if you do well in the job you will definitely be going to get a higher hike in the wages later on.
In conclusion, I believe for those who are ready to change the bad situations or trying to overcome situations are always get a fulfillment in their life than those who ready to accept the situation and live with the same.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
some people believes to accept the bad situa...
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Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
... such things. In my opinion, it always better to get rid of unsatisfactory situations...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
... to job satisfaction and lack of money. people need a job for earning money and withou...
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Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...r earning money and without money, they cant live in this world. people are forced t...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ut money, they cant live in this world. people are forced to stick to their job for th...
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Line 6, column 123, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...rying to overcome situations are always get a fulfillment in their life than those ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26449275362 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25592582397 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460144927536 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.1337186737 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0666409429921 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349679259643 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452826476226 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0472134683141 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437874407794 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 12.4159519038 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 78.4519038076 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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