Some people believe that the best way to increase the road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars. To what extend do you agree or disagree.
Road safety is one of the major concerns today and according to the opinion of a part of the society the problem can be resolved by increasing the minimum legal age of driving automobile. I totally accord with the statement because of lack of proper experience and maturity which can only be possessed with age.
Though, it is possible for a person to learn and pass their driving test at an early age but there is a huge difference between driving in an empty arena, where the test is conducted, and driving on the roads. At a younger age, mind is not completely developed and even the reflexes are not strong enough to match that of other adult drivers which in turn are one of the foremost reasons of motor accidents happening today. In illustration, according to a survey conducted by WHO in the year 2012 the number of accidents occurring each year are majorly due to lack of attentiveness, high speed or loud music which are mostly found in early age drivers.
Additionally, most of the teenagers being notorious and lacking proper maturity commit unjustified acts such as breaking the traffic rules, ignoring the proper safety measures, overtaking from wrong lanes which not only proves to be a threat to their own life but also put life of the other drives at stake.
In conclusion, the minimum legal age for a person to get an automobile driving license should be increased from what it is currently in order to avoid violation of laws and reduce the count of accidents witnessed each year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77566539924 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61470921977 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577946768061 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6428067701 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.428571429 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.5714285714 20.7667163134 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182514822865 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903248424422 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837276199726 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11921112917 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656432240143 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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