Imagine you have just been given $10,000. Would you:
A. spend it
B. save it
C. invest it
Money is a necessary part of everyone's life, and imagine living without it is inevitable. Numerous methods to use funds are invented, but undergoing each of them is a private choice. Considering my life circumstances, If I were given several thousands of dollars, I would spend them carefully in three ways.
Every person has every studied and realized that the best education is not cheap. I am an undergraduate student who seeks to be enrolled in one of the top universities in America, but prices do not satisfy me at all. Therefore, I would be better off saving a third of the given money for my future education. As well as with studying programs, people sometimes need money for suddenly emerging financial challenges. For instance, last year my washing machine, which cost 500 dollars, broke down, and I had to purchase a new one. These are the reasons why I would save money for a rainy day.
Although saving money could be beneficial, some businessmen argue that investing funds is the only way to reach success. My opinion is not so radical, but surely has something in common with that view. When you have extra money, depositing it into an account at interest is neither hard nor risky. However, if you resemble an avid gambler who spends every penny, investing funds is a dangerous idea. I am not a betting man, so providing brokers with the second third of my money sounds conscious.
Eventually, nobody can claim that pleasure or relaxation is not desirable. Buying ice cream after hard work or visiting the cinema at the weekend helps to cope with stress and relax. Unlike me, someone can pose that spending money in such a way is reckless and has a lot of shortcomings, but I do not agree. Funds I spend on spontaneous things cannot be compared in size with those I invest or save, so last third of given money I would spend exactly in everyday life.
To conclude, there is no distinct and proper way to use money. A method to choose hardly depends on current obstacles, planned events, or ascetism of every person. In my situation, I would divide funds according to my ambitions in all three groups: investment, savings, relaxation. I cannot highlight one group, because they are all greatly interconnected and "losing one variable I would never solve an equation of success".
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 498, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ond third of my money sounds conscious. Eventually, nobody can claim that pleasu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1921.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82663316583 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77913186079 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597989949749 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.2814324445 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.3181818182 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177156353704 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461802240035 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592417769224 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942232948129 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415067288281 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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