Some construction work is being done on the street where you live for the last couple of days. Noise from the work is loud and it disturbs you. Write a letter to your local council complaining about the noise. In your letter:
Introduce yourself
Explain how the noise is causing problems to you
Suggest solution to the problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is ABC and I am a current resident at Briargrove apartments. My apartment is close to the main street where current construction work is taking place. I am writing to you as the noise coming out of this construction work is causing some disturbance in my work.
As you understand that the COVID-19 pandemic has forced many to start working from home including me. It is very difficult for me to focus on my work and attend office meetings. Especially the drilling job that is being carried out currently is extra noisy. The work goes on for almost the entire day which really creates an unpleasant environment to even step out of my apartment.
I have a couple of suggestions that may help alleviate this issue. Firstly, it would be great if you could reschedule this work for weekends so that it won’t disturb in my office work on weekdays. Also, if you could replace some of the old pieces of equipment which are causing major trouble, that will help reduce the noise level in the daytime.
Thank you for understanding and your cooperation in this matter.
Yours faithfully,
ABC
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 270, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is causing some disturbance in my work. As you understand that the COVID-19 pandem...
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Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...on weekdays. Also, if you could replace some of the old pieces of equipment which are causi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, really, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69258240357 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627551020408 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8362942827 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302863031772 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10886727785 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783993343089 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1777976706 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030409999753 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.