do you agree or disagree with the following statement
teachers were more appreciated and valued in the past than nowaday
give specific reasons for your support
No one can doubt the important role of the teacher in our life. The teacher is the person responsible for shaping the future of everyone because his/her job is to educate students in all sorts of subjects.So the job as a teacher is one of the most crucial professions in the world. Some people propose that in the past teachers were more appreciated than nowaday. In fact, I think this opinion is right for many reasons which I will explain deeply in the upcoming paragraphs.
First and foremost, in the old days teachers worked honestly than now. In the past, teachers dedicated their lives educating students all kinds of information related to the subject they teach regardless if the student was intelligent or had some difficulty in the learning process. We can touch that from many stories in history that tell us how much teachers were considered as heros. For instance, when grandma was in primary school, her teacher used to explain everything for her, and when he knowed that she couldn't buy the science book, he bought one for her for free and he didn't embrace her in front of the whole class but he gave it to her as a gift . From my grandma's experience, teachers in the past were more trustful, so they deserved more respect.
Second, the uncommon use of technology made teachers eager to read and investigate the materials they taught. In the past, especially before the internet, teachers and professors used to research the reliability of information by performing experiments and examine many references until they reach the truth. But now, teachers open Google to look for any idea without checking the credibility of the resource. For example, my sister always struggles with math, and she has hard times understanding mathematical equations, especially geometry. When my mother asked my sister’s teacher to explain all these difficult rules, the teacher refused and said search on the internet for explanatory videos. Consequently, my sister even after watching these videos , she didn't understand and she got bad grades in math. As a result, if the teacher just paid attention to my sister in class and assisted her as the teacher should do, my sister's grades might be better.
All in all, teachers in the past were more appreciated and valued because of their honesty and also for their feeling of responsibility toward their students. Therefore, I hope that nowaday teachers try to change their ways of teaching by making a blend between the old ways and the most resentful ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, honestly, if, look, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2091.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94326241135 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68966598562 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557919621749 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8012120259 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.166666667 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27777777778 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239234690408 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832759397825 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720126033416 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155973604967 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350289068691 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.