Everyone should eat vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problem.
Do you agree or disagree?
While there is a contradiction of eating non vegetarian food, vegan food supports healthy lifestyle. To be very precise, I strongly believe that eating herbivore will never make you obese at the same time will refrain your health from high risk diseases.
Firstly, people eating leafy vegetables can maintain their weight very easily. Diet containing vegetables helps to give more energy at the same time makes you look fit as it does not contain any fat. For Example, People going on fat loss program like in case of celebrities are often suggested to eat diet that contains essential vitamins such as Vitamin D, vitamin c and these are found in vegetables and fruits such as cabbage, carrot and oranges. Also, having vegetables like tomatoes and spinach keeps skin tighten and glowing. Thus, putting yourself on vegetables and fruits will make you look younger and healthy.
Secondly, it has been observed that having carnivore diet can lead into high cholesterol that can be the foremost cause for heart attack. With the advancement of technology, now it has become easy to find out the kind of fat body constitute of. Fleshy food contains high level of saturated fat and are not easily digestible. Although food like fish is a great source of vitamin d, cannot be eaten on daily basis. A study done in oxford university suggests that 70% health problems occurs because of consumption of meat on regular basis. For instance, people eating red meat are prone to gain weight at the same time they can suffer from high blood pressure. Therefore, it is advisable not to have fleshy food in diet on daily basis so s to avoid diseases like kidney disorders and cancer.
To recapitulate, I would rather say having green vegetables that contain numerous vitamins will support long life system without being getting hit by any high risk disease as in case of non-vegan food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested eating'.
Suggestion: suggested eating
...m like in case of celebrities are often suggested to eat diet that contains essential vitamins s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93059936909 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49283621675 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608832807571 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3721180596 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184277501609 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596450552477 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520722600441 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102773823359 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627932650939 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.