You are going on holiday next week and you need to ask your friend to watch your dog while you are away.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
1) state how long you will be away
2) tell them what needs to be done
3) state how you will compensate them
Dear Andrew,
How are you? I am fine and hope the same from your side. As you are aware that we are traveling to our hometown. So, will be out of the station for next week and need your help to look after my dog during our absence.
Next week is the Pongal holiday being a grand festival for us. We planned to celebrate with parents' in our hometown and will stay for next week over there. I am aware that you will be going on walking in the morning. So, I request you to can take my lovely puppies outside for a walk and buy some milk while you come back home, can you feed them with pedigree food twice a day and have placed the dog utensils inside the garage. Please feel free to contact me in case of any emergencies on my mobile phone at 9000940392 or via email at meetmeabc@gmail.com. I will compensate for your help when you are on vacation I will look after your cat.
Thank you again for your kind help.
With Love,
abc
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 58, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... fine and hope the same from your side. As you are aware that we are traveling to ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19337016575 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27769089825 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624309392265 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4892113834 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.25 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390239814399 0.216113520407 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147097692218 0.0766984524023 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963380948055 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291427367871 0.12726935374 229% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501708781196 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.43 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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