some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
In each city impressive buildings play an important role in tourism development and governments are very focused on it. It is considered by some people that the attraction of buildings is really important while there others who think governments should spend money on improving schools and hospitals. In this essay, I am going to discuss both opinions to show my aspects more clearly.
Impressive city buildings are a great attraction for tourists. It has a lot of advantages, especially benefits from tourism. For instance, when you visit an impressive building, you maybe have to spend money seeing the building so that it can bring income to cities that you travel to. In addition, impressive buildings are built and used for different functions or it is a place where takes place events such as concerts, exhibitions and so on. Moreover, impressive buildings maybe become the city’s icon.
However, the government should ensure that they do not ignore their citizens. They need to improve student learning conditions such as schools. If they don’t improve schools, children cannot be educated properly. Besides, hospitals are really important in our life but there have lots of people who do not get care. Therefore, the government needs to build more hospitals to help people. If people don’t have good healthcare, not only their work will decrease, but the city’s economy will also go down.
Overall, I think the government should spend some money on the city’s building because of the development of the city. However, they should make sure that they have more modern schools and hospitals to improve the lives of citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15730337079 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69772137683 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8333103891 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0625 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273778338976 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883625517251 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600551078611 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170075393224 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048654003711 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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