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There are times when it is acceptable not to tell the truth.
Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer
Although I personally avoid telling lies, but I think that there are situations that it is wise not to tell the pure truth.
Truthfulness is an appreciated characteristic and nearly everybody in the world admire it because this is a key element in making trust and faith. When people trust each other they feel convenient and peaceful. Knowing the truth helps them to make rational decisions and relatively accurate predictions. Accordingly, the main function of exposing truth is promoting the trust, peace, and good feelings in a society.
However, there are situations that naked truth will l...
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Sentence: Truthfulness is an appreciated characteristic and nearly everybody in the world admire it because this is a key element in making trust and faith.
Description: The fragment world admire it is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace admire with verb, past tense
Sentence: Another example is when parents hide their arguments and conflictions from their children in order to protect them from the adverse effects of such frictions in family.
Error: conflictions Suggestion: No alternate word
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.053 0.07
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No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 362 350
No. of Characters: 1758 1500
No. of Different Words: 196 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.362 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.856 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 101 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.053 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.236 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.421 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.283 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.549 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.053 0.07
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