The plans show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
The plans show how a park has altered since it was built in 1920.
Overall, we can see that despite significant adaptations, the park retains the basic elements of flowers, water, seating, and music with the addition of a cafe and a children's play area.
when the park opened in 1920, there was a large fountain in the center. This has now been replaced with a sizeable rose garden and seats all around it. In addition, the glasshouse to the right of the Eldon street entrance has gone and in its place, there is a water feature.
To the left of where the fountain once stood, there used to be a bandstand with a stage for musicians. An amphitheater for concerts and associated seating now takes up this space. Similarly, the pond for water plants has been removed and there is a children's play area in the northeast corner and a cafe has been built nearby. Around the edges of the park, there were rose gardens with park benches for people to smell the flowers and listen to music. Only one of the smaller rose gardens remains on the north side of the park and the seats have been taken away. Access to the park is still via the two original entrances, but there is now a third entrance near the water feature from an underground park.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...of a cafe and a childrens play area. when the park opened in 1920, there was a la...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, still, third, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49779735683 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30668802424 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559471365639 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8629162274 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8181818182 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233256997057 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998536632175 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118832113839 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165032808231 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088659948633 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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