What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a car?
These days, buying a private car is becoming increasingly popular. For many people, especially young generation, prefer to commute with private cars rather than public transports. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, i will discuss some of the reasons why having a car is so popular and some of the reasons not to buy them.
Let's begin by looking at the benefits of having a car. One of the main positives of owning a car is that one can move around freely and decide when and where to go. For example, at night public transportation is not available and getting from A to B is problematic. This can give an opportunity to easy transportation.
Another benefit of personal vehicles is that it does not take so long time to go to different places. What i mean by this is that people do not waste time waiting for buses which are depending on timetables. So, in the majority of cases car owners get to their destination on time which is important.
Turning to the other side of the argument, private cars have their drawbacks too. One negative side of it is pollution. As i see, it leads to air pollution, global warming or even affects greenhouse emissions. This can effect humans' health that causes illnesses such as headache, stress or depression. Moreover, the number of cars is rising dramatically, it contributes the traffic jam and sometimes accidents. In other words, it effects transportation and road system. In addition, the cost of gasoline is expensive which means that not all people can afford to buy a car.
To sum up, owning a vehicle is never easy. People need to weigh up the pros of moving freely, avoid wasting time, and the negatives including pollution, health problems, traffic jam and accidents as well. Personally, i believe that the benefits in terms of freely commuting eventually outweigh any negatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, for example, i mean, in addition, such as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78703703704 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80250142745 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58950617284 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4746133896 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.8571428571 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174968658623 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472611905209 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594296153306 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880773760283 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479419294508 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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