The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
Sumarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates plans for two possble sites for a new shoping centre (s) in the towm of Garlsdon. It can be seen that the two sites under consideration are located in the countryside and in the city centre of Garlsdon.
The first possible supermarket site (S1) is in the north east of te town, above the railway line, which runs from the south east to the city to the north west, besides it is also below the main road which runs from city centre to the Hindon. If the shopping centre is built here, it will be next to a large housing estate and near to the people who live in suburb with around 10.000 population.
The planned site in the city centre (S2) is again just by the railway line and also can be reaced by main roads from some directions such as Crasdon, in the south east of the city with 25km distance, Brandon,with 16km dictance from the south west and Hindon with distance 12km long from the north west. In addition, this site will be next to the larger resident and close to the indstrial location from the southern. Therefore, this supermarket will be easily accessed by a larger number of people around the Garlsdon town.
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| 2020-11-15 | Risma Sibarani | 71 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , with
... of the city with 25km distance, Brandon,with 16km dictance from the south west and H...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, so, therefore, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44761904762 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32663762335 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.051002344 43.030603864 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.428571429 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189271080196 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104887553265 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104693117203 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149806792155 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827326435823 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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