The chart below shows the sleep patterns of people in five different occupations according to a Canadian study. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the pattern of sleeping according to a Canadian study in people of five different jobs.
According to the given data, students sleep for the duration of 8 hours from 11pm to 7am continuously. While, with regards to the truck drivers the sleep cycle is disruptive. They sleep from 4pm to 7pm and after that they stay awake for next 12 hours and again fall asleep for next 3 hours from 7am to 11am.
With regards to full time mothers, the circadian rhythm is totally disturbing as they sleep from 10pm to 6pm with a gap from 1am to 3 am. Also they are the only one who take short nap during day from 1pm to 3pm. Talking about the Business Executives, they sleep for a duration of about 6 hours. Lastly, the Doctors who sleep for only 5 hours from 1am to 7am with a gap of one hour in between.
Overall, Students sleep the most and doctors the least.
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- The chart below shows the sleep patterns in five different occupations according to a Canadian study Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The chart below shows the sleep patterns of people in five different occupations according to a Canadian study Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... 8 hours from 11pm to 7am continuously. While, with regards to the truck drivers the ...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...rs from 7am to 11am. With regards to full time mothers, the circadian rhythm is totall...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...0pm to 6pm with a gap from 1am to 3 am. Also they are the only one who take short na...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, so, while, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 716.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39263803681 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28278573084 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552147239264 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2678510731 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5555555556 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122974807517 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754570778496 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124702276078 0.0843802449381 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139533089311 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164800659765 0.0819641961636 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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