Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who cannot accept criticism will not succeed working in teams.
Ubdoubtedly, success is a vital aim in every body's lilfe. We try in our life to learn more skills and attempt to apply them alongside our life to achieve our goals. While some people think that they could live better in a criticism free environment, others disagree. In my opinion, criticism can be useful in our life trajectory to reach our objective with more successful rate. In what follows, i delve into my notable reasons.
To begin with, no body is perfect, and we need to improve our attitude, knowledge, and abilities to succeed in our personal and professional life. Knowing our weakness is first step in this process which end up attempting to work hard to achieve better abilities. How to know about our skills which we need to improve? Listenning to other people's honestly critics is one of the straightforward and easiest way to get familliar with them. Therefore, paying attention to others comments, help us improve our aptitiude with more work. For instance, when I was student in the university, I had a very loyal friend, who talked frankly and even he found something to say something about me, he honestly speak his mind and crirticed me. At first, I did not like this behavior, but after listenning to his comment, gradually I found that his comment showed some of points in my personality through improving them I could get stronger skills specially in English speaking skills. Had not listen to my friend critics, I would not have those strong skills in pronaunciation and intonation in speaking English language.
Furthermore, listening to other people critics provides us a golden opportunity to broden our horizon through a very good brain storming process. In a professional way of thinking about any issue, brain storming, through which we can expand our idea and thoughs, we increase our chance to find the best way of reaching success. In the second step listen to our critics about ideas and filtring impractical and unsiutable ones help us narrow down the way to success. In this step we should listen to our colleagues critics and this is a critical and bottleneck step. If people know how to bear othres critics, they will more likely to find the best road to be successful. In a very famous book about strategic way of thinking to success, I read about the principal imporrtnce of ability of listening to other people critics as a basic needed skill to get success.
In general, I strongly believe that ability of tolerating other people critics is integral to get success. This is because listenning to critics expose us to our weakness, which is necessary if we want to improve our ability, and because this ability provid folks an opportunity to find more options of approach to think about a question and find its answer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, frankly, furthermore, honestly, if, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in general, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 52.1666666667 159% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2296.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85412262156 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71469476122 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507399577167 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 705.6 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1078959034 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5238095238 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102244852709 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396351315564 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348585389212 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682039839477 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131794159568 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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