Some people believe that arts like music and painting should not be funded by the government. Others believe that these are importance for a society and need government funding.
What is your opinion?
Many people feel that government ought not to provide a fund for creative activities such as music and painting. I totally agree with this opinion because the taxes should be used for more important concerns to meet basic needs and artistic activities can be supported by sponsors.
The main reason why I believe government should not spend its money for art is because society still have vital aspects we have to focus on and provide financial support. To illustrate, our education, healthcare, infrastructure and defence now have many deficiencies and need enhancement to improve living conditions of all people. For example, many residents who are living in remote locations don’t have adequate essential utility (water and electricity), and infrastructure (roads, schools and hospitals) which leads their lives hard and difficult, if not extreme poverty. Besides, in the current background of international tension, government should furnish money in order to strengthen national security which guarantees a stable and sustainable living for all citizens.
Another reason why I support the notion that art should not by funded by the government is due to the fact that it can be funded by other sources like individual donors, corporations and institutions. Indeed, big firms always set aside funds and donors make monetary donating to contribute to the community, especially for artistic activities with various practical actions involving building cultural houses like theater and museum, and supporting money for these organizations, as well as supply artistic equipment for schools.
In conclusion, I completely agree that government money should not be used for art because this fund should be used for filling crucial needs of all people and other donors can help support artistic fields. Finally, I think the government’s money should be used carefully to create better lives for every people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, if, so, still, then, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47297297297 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90058525366 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584459459459 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.7055186948 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.0 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370575026285 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150584596255 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894915715978 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23199192446 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575332278718 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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