People say that it is a waste of time for high school students to learn literature at school To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

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People say that it is a waste of time for high school students to learn literature at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Besides science subjects, Literature is a subject that belongs to the social field. Nowadays, in Vietnamese education system, Literature is applied to all levels of education comprise elementary, junior high-school or high school. It is said that high school students studying Literature is ineffective. I strongly disagrees that the subject is useless and this essay below will show how the subject affects to the society somehow.
Firstly, studying Literature helps people to express their feelings more deeply and concisely through words. In one fact, reading a good novel that provides knowledge about using the right words or sentences to describe deeper feelings depends on the atmosphere and many other elements. Therefore, it could bring benefits to people in their daily conversations or pep talks.
In the second fact, the richness of vocabulary in Literature can also improve high school learners’ imagination. For instance, through literary works, people can feel beautiful images and melodies just by reading them. Those who have spent time on observing and listening to the natural responses in the morning of the village, or the neighborhood, or when the night fall, would be always see the beauty deeply inside their souls and get abilities to show up all by words.
Nevertheless, Literature gives many valuable lessons about life and morality. This is considered as the main reason why this subject should be put in many levels of education including high school. Like the fairy tale named Cinderella is known for its moral lesson is being kind, hard-working and good issues would be coming to those who are deserved.
On the whole, Literature could help people get better at expressing feelings through words. Literature is one of the most essential subjects and creates ways to make life even more vibrant. It helps people develop thinking, not only scientifically but also meditate on the life around. Those advantages are always potential and helpful for the life of civilizations.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 316, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'disagree'
Suggestion: disagree
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, for instance, on the whole

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 5.05154639175 317% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 937.175257732 181% => OK
No of words: 319.0 206.0 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30407523511 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76865161169 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 127.690721649 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 290.88556701 180% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.17846788 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5294117647 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22848890259 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744244629541 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672445596578 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118384311128 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625996589046 0.0580467560999 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 41.2886597938 199% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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