Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they respond to the specific concerns presented in the reading passage.
The reading and the lecture discuss about many problems of sending huams to Mars. The reading states the three main issues which the Mars misssion is faced, but the lecturer suggest thet many solutions on these problems are provided. She explained the solutions as are listing below:
First, the reading argues about the deficiancy of food, water and oxygen in the two-year trip to the Mars. In the meantime, the lecturer suggests that a specific procedure which is hydroponix, will allow astronauts to have enough food, fresh air and water. She mentions that by means of this solution, astronauts could cultivate many plants without any soil, to provide themselves food ,and also by absorbing carbon dioxide, they will have fresh air, and they could recycle their waste water az well.
Secondly, according to the text, it is harmful for astronauts to be in zero-gravity condition lasting too long. On the other hand, the lecturer disputs that many similar experences had been achieved through previous space trips and she believes that based on these experences, regular excersie and taking vitamin pills as additional sources, will solve the health problems.
Finally, the text claims that for astronauts it would be very hazardous to be in exposure of the space radiation. While the lecturer explains that solar radiations are only sporadically and many instruments are used to detect the solar radiation, in order to prevent the exposure of being steadily in the radiations. In addition, she says that, nowadays, many light weight shelters are also used for protecting the spaceship from danagraous radiations.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The extended family grandparents cousins aunts and uncles is less important now than it was in the past Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- In most professions and academic fields imagination is more important than knowledge Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be sure to address the most comp 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 260.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22307692308 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58813862427 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 145.348785872 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603846153846 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2565833182 49.2860985944 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.8 110.228320801 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 21.698381199 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06452816374 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139568753881 0.272083759551 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574047223235 0.0996497079465 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288588236489 0.0662205650399 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795540084413 0.162205337803 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258100549947 0.0443174109184 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.3589403974 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.