Government investments in the arts, such as music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public instead. To what extend do you agree or disagree to it?
Governments grand financial support in various artistical areas such as music and theatre. Some do have the feelings that it is worthless to spend public money into arts, instead that budget should allocate to services such as scool or hospitals. I agreed to the afformentioned statement that public sector need more investments, but i do believe that promoting arts have also some benefits to the society.
On the one hand, education and health of every citizen are the backbones of a countries prosparecy. But there are still many places where the ordinary people cannot afford to go school and get propor treatment because of the economical background. So the government budget should more incline towards backword areas in a society. For example, there are 800 tribal kids resides in forest areas in kerala and among them, only 10 percentage goto school. Because they need to walk hundreds of miles to reach schools in nearest village and path have much difficulties like wild animal attack. Therefore, governments should start program to ensure education to the tribal kids.
On the other hand, arts include music, dance, theatre, sculture making and so on. There are many people rely on these jobs. They may not be able to make profit from artworks due to various reasons like off-seasons, low pay, high duration of work and so on. Moreover, futuristic recreation potrays history and traditional values ina particular region and government should ensure the existence of such arrforms. In addition, people find relaxation from chaose of life while watching or listening to art programs. So a minimal funding to art fields by governments helps both artists and society.
To conclude, although government's prime focus should be service sectors such as schools and hospitals, it cannot neglect the influence of arts in the society.
- Government investments in the arts such as music and theatre is a waste of money Governments must invest this money in public instead To what extend do you agree or disagree to it 89
- Government investments in the arts such as music and theatre is a waste of money Governments must invest this money in public instead To what extend do you agree or disagree to it 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 937.175257732 165% => OK
No of words: 298.0 206.0 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18791946309 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66817142956 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 127.690721649 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624161073826 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 290.88556701 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0177968146 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.625 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 4.34317383033 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187491050125 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574605325138 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533062907344 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120395429395 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710494596204 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 41.2886597938 203% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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