Government investments in the arts, such as music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public instead. To what extend do you agree or disagree to it?
Governments grand financial support in various artistical areas such as music and theatre. Some do have the feelings that it is worthless to spend public money into arts, instead that budget should allocate to services such as scool or hospitals. I agreed to the afformentioned statement that public sector need more investments, but i do believe that promoting arts have also some benefits to the society.
On the one hand, education and health of every citizen are the backbones of a countries prosparecy. But there are still many places where the ordinary people cannot afford to go school and get propor treatment because of the economical background. So the government budget should more incline towards backword areas in a society. For example, there are 800 tribal kids resides in forest areas in kerala and among them, only 10 percentage goto school. Because they need to walk hundreds of miles to reach schools in nearest village and path have much difficulties like wild animal attack. Therefore, governments should start program to ensure education to the tribal kids.
On the other hand, arts include music, dance, theatre, sculture making and so on. There are many people rely on these jobs. They may not be able to make profit from artworks due to various reasons like off-seasons, low pay, high duration of work and so on. Moreover, futuristic recreation potrays history and traditional values ina particular region and government should ensure the existence of such arrforms. In addition, people find relaxation from chaose of life while watching or listening to art programs. So a minimal funding to art fields by governments helps both artists and society.
To conclude, although government's prime focus should be service sectors such as schools and hospitals, it cannot neglect the influence of arts in the society.
- Government investments in the arts such as music and theatre is a waste of money Governments must invest this money in public instead To what extend do you agree or disagree to it 89
- Government investments in the arts such as music and theatre is a waste of money Governments must invest this money in public instead To what extend do you agree or disagree to it 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18791946309 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66817142956 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624161073826 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0177968146 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187491050125 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574605325138 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533062907344 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120395429395 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710494596204 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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