Get children interested in space exploration

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Get children interested in space exploration

Children have their own innate interests and parents should always encourage them. But subjects like astronomy needs an introduction. In this essay, I will suggest some of my ideas in how to to get children interest in space exploration.
First of all is you can paint the ceiling. This is one of the easiest and effective ways to get your kid's attention turn to the skies. You can use any image like a night sky, stars, moon, the solar system or even a galaxy. You can do this as soon as the baby is old enough to recognize images. Secondly, buy them some books on astronomy. Older children who like reading books will certainly prefer to know more about space through books. Finally, if you have money, buy them a telescope. But remind yourself that telescope is expensive and only buy them if your kids really show an interest in knowing more about astronomy, Children are curious by nature and love asking questions. If you want your kids to know more about astronomy, you should be prepared to answer some questions from them.
Get children interested in space exploration is not a difficuuld problem, it is depend on how your kids know and want to learn more about it

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, mind you, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62679425837 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46101444754 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593301435407 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1542056059 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3846153846 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280523878244 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096864059685 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138345452358 0.0603063233224 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285992249679 0.12726935374 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137769965468 0.0580467560999 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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