Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork. Which of the two approaches do you prefer?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People possess different perspective of accompanying their children. Some may prefer to spend their to play with their children, others may consider to discuss homework with them. In my opinion, I prefer to play my kids based on the following reasons.
First, the philosophy of my life is to enjoy life, and I want to educate my next generation to play hard in their life. To be more specific, I want to show them the greatness of mother earth, the culture of playing sports and the strategy of playing board game because I think people who can enjoy life better can be more succeed in their future life and their mindset. For example, if my kids learn how to play board game, and they would understand that the process of playing game is more important than the result.
Second, it is teacher's profession about schoolwork, and parents might not be able to provide correct concept. To elaborate, my parents usually use time to do homework with me. However, they left school for many years and they provided wrong concept to me while we discussing schoolwork. For example, I had a homework about observing wax and wane about moon. The purpose of the homework is to teach us the moon light is the reflection of sun. Nevertheless, my father believes that the moon can shine by itself. This contradict the textbook I had learned from class, and it confused me.
Admittedly, parents have responsibilities of helping schoolwork for their children. And when it comes to shopping for class preparation, I think the parents should help. Maybe some children have cooking lesson in school, it requires parent to help their children to prepare ingredients before class. Or perhaps they have a football class in physical education class, and their parent should help for buying socks and shoes for their kids. If it is not directly lead to concept educating, it can be acceptable for parents to help.
To sum up, I strongly agree to play games and sports with my daughters and sons since I believe not only they can learn to enjoy life but also the philosophy that conveyed by me while playing. On the other hand, in most case, parents may influence their children with wrong concept while teaching their schoolwork. Only specific circumstances should be appropriate for parents to help.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider discussing'.
Suggestion: consider discussing
...to play with their children, others may consider to discuss homework with them. In my opinion, I pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, while, for example, i think, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84910485934 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61640203682 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506393861893 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1075811538 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2857142857 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.619047619 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229850758179 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712805140047 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671245751846 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124580831713 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275002834964 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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