You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend.
In your letter:
• say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
• explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
• suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Deva,
How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to give you a suggestion on either continue studies or join for a job.
As I know you are an ambitious person and have logical thinking to solve problems, even I know you are not much interested in getting degrees. I still remember when we are studying for a degree you said your goal is to become a Sales Manager officer for one of the top 5 companies.
I suggest to full fill your dreams better start the career, in parallel if required later years you can complete additional educational levels by doing part-time. You don’t do the same mistake which I did, currently, I have enough educational background but the recruitment companies asking for at least 1 or 2 years of work experience.
According to me, you can start your career as a sales executive, as I remember you said you got some job offers in this sector from some reputed companies. Why not you try to go and attend the interviews to kick start your carrier in the marketing sector. I wish you all the best, good luck.
Take care and write back soon. Say my regards to aunty and uncle.
Best regards,
LIma
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| 2021-05-11 | hivafara77 | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Deva, How are you? I hope this letter finds yo...
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Line 7, column 3, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest fulling'.
Suggestion: suggest fulling
...r for one of the top 5 companies. I suggest to full fill your dreams better start the caree...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ast 1 or 2 years of work experience. According to me, you can start your career as a sales e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54460093897 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51160984277 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661971830986 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.916998353 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4615384615 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277193560405 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928268576795 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667445580936 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14293710729 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850426212366 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.