Some people think news has no connection to peoples lives so it is a waste of time read the news in newspaper and watch televisions news

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...that news is irrelevant to peoples lives , but I think that news help to peoples w...
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Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...s lives , but I think that news help to peoples will know the latest events Firstly ...
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Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...p to peoples will know the latest events Firstly , people will learn a lot of inf...
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Line 2, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...s will know the latest events Firstly , people will learn a lot of informaition...
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Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...reading newspaper or watching TV program . They will may see news programm all fam...
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Line 2, column 185, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...see news programm all family and enjoyed . Secondly ,reading newspaper to old peop...
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Line 2, column 196, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ogramm all family and enjoyed . Secondly ,reading newspaper to old people to relax...
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Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...per to old people to relax and entertain . Some old people prefer read and learn a...
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Line 2, column 332, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
... a lot of informaition through newspaper , but young people prefer watching TV new...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ng TV news programm and enjoy. Thirdly , as a number of office workers and stude...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...eir jobs and study a lot of informaition , news programm help them relax and escap...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... relax and escape from sophisticate work . Some people think that watch news pr...
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Line 4, column 85, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...and read newspaper it is a waste of time , but in fact it is a very useful activit...
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Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...but in fact it is a very useful activity . Many people learn useful informaition t...
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Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nformaition through in the news programm . For examlle ; My bestfrends office work...
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Line 4, column 265, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...ds office workers and he is allways busy , but he has free time like reading a new...
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Line 4, column 313, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...e has free time like reading a newspaper , because he intrestind what happenes in ...
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Line 4, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he intrestind what happenes in the world I think that watching news programm and ...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
...ing news programm and reading newspaper absolutely necessary . However , don’t know that we have ler...
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Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d reading newspaper absolutely necessary . However , don’t know that we have lerar...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...newspaper absolutely necessary . However , don’t know that we have lerarn a lot of...
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Line 6, column 12, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
... and relaxed in watching TV But wait...theres more?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, i think, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95693779904 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70703899966 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521531100478 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0816102752 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.111111111 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88888888889 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.483716399527 0.244688304435 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.231567534086 0.084324248473 275% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150461647913 0.0667982634062 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241185203984 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159648113641 0.056905535591 281% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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