Eating too much sugar is harmful to our health. Some people think that it is the government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption, while others think that it is an individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
many researches have been done to show that consuming sugar regularly is not healthy for the human. some fraction of society thinks that it is the responsibility of the central to control the consumption while other think that the citizen should take the ownership to limit the intake of this harmful product. The essay will discuss both the views followed by the conclusive statement.
it is moral duty of the government to take care of their citizen's health. There are many ways in which they access sugar consumption can be controlled. Firstly, the government can limit the production of sugar to limit the household supply. As soon as the supply is restricted, the price will increase and people will start shifting towards other available alternatives.In addition to this, the authorities should also focus on increasing the awareness about the side effects of over consumption of this sucrose product. they can advertise it over Tv and put hoardings on the footpath so that people can read and learn.
However, no one can take better care of a person than himself. Every individual's body is different from other and hence they can not be measured on same scale. some people might have diabetes history and therefore they need to keep the sweetening products at bay. Moreover, people should start focusing on the traditional ways.For instance, in older times, our parents used to put jaggery or honey in food for better health.
concluding the above discussion, it is evident that the it is government's duty to take care of the health of their voters but in my opinion, it is more of the responsibility of the person to keep the check of the sugar consumption according to their health status.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94425087108 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72659159753 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550522648084 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5365591145 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.153846154 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322779064277 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100978392437 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732940931203 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184681442774 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607126095158 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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