It is necessary for parents to attend a parenting training course to bring their children up.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that some would argue that parents should be participated in parenting course to gain more knowledge with regards to bring up their children. However, I completely disagree with this view and will be given my reasons below.
From an overall perspective, there are a viable drawbacks of parenting courses. Perhaps the major reason why people should not be joined in those guided-led education is that all children have own uniqueness behaivor pattern, hence, those courses might fail to educate parents how to behave their children due to unfamiliar behaviour patterns amongst the infants. If parents start their own bond with their baby that would be lead to a strong communication between them and parents can easily assimiliate knowledge which belong their children behaivor pattern in order to give more accurate perspective to educate their babies as they grow.
Furthermore, parenting course might be resulted in loss of money and self-trusty of parents because after taking those educations, parents are more likely to council any emergency and other situations with experts. For instance, researchers has proven that the most of parents who take parenting course have a tendencay to call back their course about unexpected situations. Nevertheless, if they set out their own self-learning about become more involve with upbringing of their children, parents can obtain more experience and confidence in the way of rising their children by themselves.
In conclusion, although more and more people tend to take part those parenting courses so as to acquire parenting skills truly, I believe that parents should be educated by themselves because autonomous learning experience is indisputable and valuable knowledge for today’s world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 49, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'drawback'?
Suggestion: drawback
...overall perspective, there are a viable drawbacks of parenting courses. Perhaps the major...
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the parents') or simply say ''most parents''.
Suggestion: most of the parents; most parents
...stance, researchers has proven that the most of parents who take parenting course have a tenden...
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Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...nd to take part those parenting courses so as to acquire parenting skills truly, I belie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43956043956 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81548002534 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59706959707 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.1651876021 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.0 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7777777778 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333567874472 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161961101762 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723535283873 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224111686074 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409967177886 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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