You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter:
1. say how you feel about his performance
2.give details of your musical activities
3.explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities
Dear Mr Rahman,
I am writing this letter to you to express my appreciation for your performance in the musical event which was held in the Lulu auditorium in UAE on 25th December 2020.
I was absolutely mesmerized by your vocal quality as well as the techniques that you had used while singing songs with highly complicated musical notations. Although there were other singers on the floor, the spectators were captivated by the uniqueness in your voice and I became a huge admirer after the jazz last performance which you did.
I was able to understand the difficulty levels involved in your singing very well as I am a musician myself. Although I am naive in this profession, as I just passed out of my music college, I have been practicing classical as well as western music since my childhood.
If possible, I would request you give me an opportunity to join your team as an intern during your next concert tour. This will be a golden chance, not only in terms of learning music from a prowess vocalist like you, but also that this will add strength to my resume which in turn will be beneficial for my future ventures.
Kindly consider this request and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Ms Sruthy Varghese
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74885844749 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66641645164 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5601657767 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.555555556 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 16.8248392259 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243061247575 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104123138768 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603017048651 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136128345412 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583095293259 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.