the graph and table below shows the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in the three major cities
Swet Ying 4 years 7 months
The line graph illustrates the monthly average temperature while the table shows average hours of sunshine throughout a year in three cities - London, New York and Sydney.
Overall, the temperature pattern in Sydney was different than that of London and New York.
In details, Sydney had the highest temperature at the beginning of the year which was above 25°C. On the other hand, New York experienced the lowest temperature which was below 5°C. At that time, the temperature in London was slightly higher than in New York - around 10°C. In the month of February, the temperature of London and New York continued to rise whereas the temperatures of Sydney fell until the mid-July. In the month of July, New York experienced a hiking temperature and hit a peak at below 30°C while the temperature of London rose to 23°C. After that, New York hit the peak point of below 30°C. London experienced the same trend during this period. In contrast, Sydney experienced an increasing trend for its temperature in which the temperature increased from above 15°C to touch the point of 25°C in December.
Based on the table, New York had the highest annual sunshine which was 2535 while Sydney and London ranked second and third respectively with 2473 and 1180 hours of sunshine.
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- the graph and table below shows the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in the three major cities
- the graph and table below shows the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in the three major cities 67
- the graph and table below shows the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in the three major cities 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...erature pattern in Sydney was different than that of London and New York. In deta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, third, whereas, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00913242009 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63065264269 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493150684932 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2676570708 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7272727273 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242115680386 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103680504984 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142321419617 0.0843802449381 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180679465395 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.187789747329 0.0819641961636 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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