You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is soon coming to
visit you for several days. Write a letter to your friend,
asking him or her to bring some things from home which you need
saying why you need them
making arrangements to meet
Hi Jimmy,
How are you doing? Hope this email finds you good. It’s been a long time since we last were in touch but, I haven’t forgotten all the wonderful times we spent together last year. I am writing this letter to know more details about your traveling date to Jakarta.
As you were aware I am staying in Jakarta for the last years, I need your help to bring some items from India as they are not available here I tried all the ways but no luck. I am vegetarians so, I need some pickles and papads from my home. My mother will contact you to give the things, which are not more than 3 kilos, hope will not exceed your luggage.
Once you arrive, contact me on my number 08868687. However, I know almost all the places. Once you settled down we can plan to visit the water theme parks, islands as I know you like water sports we can have fun at all these places.
Take care, waiting for your reply. Convey my wishes to aunty and uncle.
Best wishes,
Jhon
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| 2020-12-17 | lindaja653 | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32608695652 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.98219866088 2.54303337028 78% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.121272462 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.2307692308 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1538461538 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.23076923077 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270594676914 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08580706305 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650609390887 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145241366253 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782448705443 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.