children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?
Argumenting, burdon on children turn out to be a great concern among youngsters. In today's Era pupils are facing a high proportion of burden from their institutes, social and from business perspectives. There are numerous number of causes for this reason whilst myriad of remedial measures are there to solve the same.
Shedding light on the prominent reason due to children facing pressure from academic, social and commercial prospective. First cause from academic institutes, more homework given by tutors onto this student mind gets disturbed by doing more and more work from home, it leads to distruction from blood relations. It is a survey from researchers that individual have to do study nearly 6 hours in a day otherwise their mind gets disturbed. Secondly, the main cause of socially burden is peer pressure due to this if one youngsters stand on first position in any field than other gets disturbed why he is not able to do this? Although, parents pressure, some progenerators pressurise to their children to stand first in a class, if they not, they even angry on them, its turn out to be a reason of depression among children. Despite from this, few peoples are also in the pressure because of their future business setups, it is the initial reason for study.
On the other side of mirror, there are a colossal of solutions such as family sport, it is the upmost solution if offsprings have a good family relations, those always a sport their infants even they fail or pass. Consequently, they will ever get success in life. Moreover, relax mind is must, they have to think each and everything with free mind and they must have a good Peer relations, those always stimulate to their friend towards success. By doing all these is certainly, all the worries will permanently removed from life.
To recapitulate, having analysed the whole scenario, it can be concluded that the issue is a serious unsurmountable and can still be alliviated with some efforts of individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9552238806 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73769915413 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564179104478 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6532923567 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.571428571 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209181282776 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718376269481 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655972280239 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105227874927 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079389399157 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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