Population explosion became a very worrying concern and the most serious threat to life on earth. Give some suggestions to address this problem.
Population is dangerously surging over the last century. It not only threats the human race but also the whole world. Experts are put forward some solutions to tackle it. In my essay, I will try to explore some suggestions among them such as education, strong laws, government support and so on.
To begin with, mass education is the most powerful weapon in the fight against over population. Education through mass media and curriculum are encouraged. All audio-visual media should be used wisely to educate the public. Through curriculum of high school students, we can impart the knowledge to t...
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