You recently hired a restaurant to host an office party at work but there were several problems with the food and service Write a letter to the restaurant manager In your letter Give details of the food and services you ordered Describe the problems that

Essay topics:

You recently hired a restaurant to host an office party at work, but there were several problems with the food and service.

Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:

Give details of the food and services you ordered

Describe the problems that occurred

Explain what you want the restaurant to do

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2020-12-30 appy 67 view
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iner with this firm as an event planner, I reached out to your restaurant based o...
^^
Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, ABC
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 3.15609756098 570% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 82.0 5.60731707317 1462% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 33.7804878049 225% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2379.0 965.302439024 246% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 517.0 196.424390244 263% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60154738878 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 3.73543355544 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80038094214 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 106.607317073 242% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.499032882012 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 752.4 283.868780488 265% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 1.53170731707 1110% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 1.07073170732 747% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 8.94146341463 257% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2088464674 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.434782609 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4782608696 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73913043478 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 3.70975609756 512% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202177596462 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577901783873 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504417598184 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118206685256 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731244181658 0.0819641961636 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 40.7170731707 302% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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