Many people are doing their shopping on the internet nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online.
Online shopping is emerging as one of the most popular way of shopping. Most people prefer to purchase things from the comforts of their home via the internet. This essay will delve in the benefits and drawbacks of online shopping before giving a personal opinion.
On one hand, online shopping has become a boon for customers due to its several advantages. People can easily visit the site from their devices such as smartphone, tablets or computer which not only saves the time to commute but also allows easy accessibility either from home or workplace. Consequently, people with jobs or disabilities can avail the services or products conveniently. Furthermore, people can compare prices between multiple sites or pages with a few clicks.
However, shopping from the internet has some drawbacks as well. Products are more expensive online, especially imported ones, cost well over three times the actual price. It is also difficult to purchase food items as the expiry day can be easily tampered with. For example I once purchased meat from Bengal meat and when the item arrived I found the meat was dry and old. When complained the customer support claimed that fresh meat was sent out and that replacement was not possible. Consequently, the meat had to be throw away as it did not seem fit to be edible. Additionally, the reviews found online for a product may be rigged by the page owners themselves.
To conclude, though shopping from the internet is a booming sector which provides people with the convenience of spot on purchase but it also has some drawbacks that people need to be aware of to experience better services.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...acks of online shopping before giving a personal opinion. On one hand, online shopping has beco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66539253307 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6199744512 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201494770074 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07330832592 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685005412538 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148989602372 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729654126117 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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