Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation
Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. I strongly opine that pride in man should be in the first step, and person must not allow them to see him in a low space.
Initially, in my personally speaking, person should have a wish to achieve something he want during his live. As a result of it, he should not be in the space where he don’t have respect. All people want to have their own live and everywhere they should have a respect. It is generally thought that all people have their rights, moreover whole world have a right to have own things, first of all a right for everything.
A popular belief is that staying with the community which respect you and have a good relation with you is give you more motivation to work hard in a friendly space. An example for the given opinion is that, big percentage of people who works in a deal and friendly community are staying in this job for many years. During their live they don’t have any problems with their colleagues and salary. An additional information is that it is not only benefit for themselves, but also for the government economy.
In conclusion, all people should know their rights and do what they want, moreover they should achieve their all goals and be in the space where he don’t have any prohibitations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...oney. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. I strongly opi...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...uld have a wish to achieve something he want during his live. As a result of it, he ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[2]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'doesn’t'.
Suggestion: doesn’t
... he should not be in the space where he don’t have respect. All people want to have t...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[2]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'doesn’t'.
Suggestion: doesn’t
... all goals and be in the space where he don’t have any prohibitations.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54085603113 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54318780391 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517509727626 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4024481263 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.25 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112539635567 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537303792209 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129188710604 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859785963876 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979895808172 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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