Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a choice' or simply 'choices'?
Suggestion: a choice; choices
...s view. While I agree with that we have a choices about jobs, products, interests, I disa...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 38, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'technology'?
Suggestion: technology
.... On the one hand, we have a different technologies which have modern technologies which ca...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 265, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...gers who control them. Its job creator. Also scholars or engineers who make new mach...
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Line 2, column 358, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a difference' or simply 'differences'?
Suggestion: a difference; differences
...roduce many types of products which had a differences in quality, appearance and speed which ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 493, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'technology'?
Suggestion: technology
...ult, in todays world we had a different technologies which has a good impact to different li...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
...thout family situation much easier than who have, because they should earn enough m...
^^^
Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun work seems to be countable; consider using: 'many works'.
Suggestion: many works
...s. As a consequence, our world not have many work which are enough for their family. In ...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75113122172 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48787316985 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579185520362 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0358886978 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4545454545 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248009110992 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11234389877 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108873130987 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206744286497 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143590239139 0.056905535591 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.