Creative artist should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in words pictures music or film in whichever way they wish There should be no government restrictions on what they do To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Freedom of expression for the innovative artists is under continuous debate for the last few decades. Some comments that they should be restricted and some are of the opinion that arts knows no boundary and artists can have complete liberty. I agree that artists should be free to the some extent that they do not hurt the feelings and sentiments of masses.
Firstly, it is fairly easy to understand why this proposal has been made. Arts is a creative ability of humans to produce objects, environment and experiences through skills and imaginations. It plays vital role in developing civic sense into communities. People learn from what they see, hear and read. To illustrate, if the people are shown immoral aspects that have detrimental effects on our society then arts will serve as best medium to channelize awareness. Movies, Songs, Books and Photos that will identify our casualness or faults are not less than treasure which in-turn will evolve us into better communities.
While unfolding the other side of the coin, some argue that if there are no supervisory bodies looking over the content produced by the these artists, then it is feared that there is a chance of unintentionally hurting feelings and sentiments of millions, especially on the sensitive subjects like religion, culture or nation. For an instance, Muslims are shown terrorists in almost every movie and for this reason Islam-o-phobia is spreading like a disease in the west world. It is causing stereo typing Muslims as terrorists. There is a dire need to have a check and balance on such topics.
To recapitulate, the aforementioned arguments are strong on both sides but there should be freedom of expression for the artists to some extent while censor boards may be setup to curb their desire so that liberty is not won at the cost of distressing majority.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01628664495 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76956492478 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609120521173 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.5577796464 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216702769408 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646838111698 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948492243851 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131995838064 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114600946265 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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