Some people believe that mothers help their children to be bright in future but others think that both parents are important. describe your view?
Undoubtedly, parents plays a vital role in children's life. Some people argue that the mother has a significant role in brighting up the future of their offspring instead of father while others argue that both parents are equal. In my opinion, both parents are important role in their children's life.
To commence with, parents do their best to make their young one's future bright. The first and foremost, children usually learn and get motivated from their parents. For instance, mother does a lot of work at home whereas father does the same at office. Both take all the responsibility to run their house. So, basically children learn from them and get motivated from their work. Further, there are some issues like fighting, feeling ashamed that are generally happened in children's life due to some reasons. So, without going to any other person, firstly they discuss with their parents. Hence, parents have ability to understand and guide them in a better way rather than others.
In addition to this, children have different attributes towards their parents. For instance, one of the parent is more strict while the other one is polite. So, in some situations, children prefer to discuss with one of them so that they get that point. Moreover, in all thr stages of life, both the parents help and support them to tackle any problem in their life. Also, mother support them in their homework while the father support them in their basic responsibilities, they generally faced in life.
To conclude that both the parents help and support their children in own way. Therefore, both have equal right and responsibilities to bringing up their children in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mportant role in their childrens life. To commence with, parents do their best ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00358422939 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52199379811 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498207885305 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9724842755 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.5555555556 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339463261738 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119562212605 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761459786075 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243247002468 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642298065112 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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