In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays number of people who is eatingfast foodis increasing daily. It brings such disease like getting overweight, heart attack and other problems related to health. Governments should set a bigger tax on this type of food and it decreases the amount of people whose health is getting bad
Firstly, this method helps people to be fit and necesserity of unhealthy food automatically falls down. Also, peoples save their money by not eating fast food and they have an opportunity to buy healthy fresh eatings. First, it reduces weight and secound the peoples who eat green foods they will be healthy and will live with enjoying of their lives.
But coin has two sites, at present the cheapest eating is fast food that is why most people buy this kind of food and necessity higher than healthy foods and the people who buy this food are mostly poors. So this way will take their contingency to eat cheap food and maybe they will get hungry. Even, it leads to dieing people.
To conclude, i say it has benefits and disadvantages but the benefits overweigh the disadvantages that is the reason why i agree. We need to think about ourselves our health is first that we should think about
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...he disadvantages that is the reason why i agree. We need to think about ourselves...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76328502415 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41875137927 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6038647343 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2209751752 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284842854668 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966042354552 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079560594057 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156663797464 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842171262274 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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