Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's world, there is a colossal upsurge in the people believing that adolescents should be indulged in voluntary work for society. Not only this can be beneficial to them, but also their voluntary service can also provide great welfare to the community. As per my view, I agree to the statement to some extent only, as I have some disagreements as well which will be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, because youths have ample of free time after school, they should be inclined towards the help to the community due to manifold reasons. Predominantly, this kind of voluntary work inculcates great habits in them which helps them to become a noble citizen in future. To explicate, as the children are every country’s future, the appropriate direction towards doing the unpaid community work contributes in developing good social conduct, interpersonal skills and selflessness as well as a sense of responsibility. Thus, not only helping the society with the charitable acts aids in the overall self-development of the juveniles, but also proves advantageous to the public. To exemplify, according to an article published in the ‘The Washington Post’, May 2019, USA, by the editor-in-chief Dr. Benjamin Bradlees on the topic of ‘Teenagers and Community Service’ clearly stated about the voluntary service done by a group of students of a school for the renovation of a park, which in turn was highly appreciated by the residents of that vicinity as well as students were also awarded by the Mayor. This motivated those students proactively to participate in making their vicinity cleaner and greener to a great extent.
However, for multifarious causes, it would be wrong to force youths to do unpaid communal activities in their leisure time. Primarily, some teenagers may not be physically strong enough and lack the necessary labour skills. To substantiate, as the adolescent period is a tender age of life, it would be really hard to do any laborious work for the juveniles and might end up with meeting accidents at the workplaces. Therefore, instead of risking the lives of the young children, it would be better to not to involve them in these kinds of voluntary works. To illustrate, according to a study by the department of ‘Child Safety and Development’, conducted research in June 2019, the USA, on a group of 440 school students of the age group of 13-16, revealed a report that 57% of accidents were done during serving the communal works.
Furthermore, teenagers are at the learning stage and mostly occupied in their academic studies as well as tight deadlines for completing the assignments. Hence, if they take time out to do unrelated jobs, there will not be time left for their study and some other activities for the comprehensive development, such as doing extra-curriculum activities, playing sport and so forth. Therefore, occupying their little free time is obviously unfair.
To encapsulate, it can be concluded that although community service is a kind act and instil many good qualities amidst the teenagers, they can still be encouraged to firstly focus on their education and considering the above mentioned pertinent risks they should avoid that to some extent. If a balanced approach is taken by the government as well as the individuals to make our community peaceful and greener, the future of the masses will thrive to its pinnacle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, really, so, still, therefore, thus, well, kind of, such as, as well as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 84.0 41.998997996 200% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2866.0 1615.20841683 177% => OK
No of words: 558.0 315.596192385 177% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13620071685 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86024933743 4.20363070211 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03030432665 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 293.0 176.041082164 166% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525089605735 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 894.6 506.74238477 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.2991139345 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.842105263 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3684210526 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.10526315789 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356210240254 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973185720214 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511404797364 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188904649222 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283689074782 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 78.4519038076 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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